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The_Paper_Tiger
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PostSubject: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSat 01 Oct 2011, 3:39 am

Hey, everyone! Melanie's in the house! >D

...

No laughter? D=

Fine. >_<

Okay, I go by MinaMongoose--usually just Mina--on the Sporum, I love to roleplay, anime/manga, blah, blah, blah, all that good shit. I can draw. I mean, seriously! I'm in a university pursuing my BFA (Bachelor's of Fine Arts), for God's sake!

Also, I recently discovered this neat little competetition thingy held every year for National Novel Writing Month. I am participating this year. If you guys are interested in reading my entry, Paper Tigers , I have a blog on wordpress that will be updated with--eventually--the entire novel. Just don't go lookin' for it now; the competition doesn't formally start until November 1st. I won't be doing any work on it until then.

However, I do have an excerpt that I wrote for the forums to be critiqued (still waiting on said critique, but yeah xP)... It consists of the first several lines. It's rather dialogue-heavy, but should give a good starting feel for some of the characters.

I'll bold it up to avoid confusion with the rest of this post:

"Watch it, Saintesse!"

"I know, dammit!" a young woman snarled as she literally dodged a bullet sharply zipping past her head, "I don't see you doing anything useful, Rune!"

"You can't even see me..."

Saintesse growled, hearing Rune's irritable statement about the obvious flaw in her word usage from her earpiece.

"Just shut up," A kick to the shin and a sharp yank on the gunman's arm ended in a loud shout; he had a harshly dislocated shoulder, after all, "stop watching whatever porn you're watching this time," A foot to the lanky man's abdomen knocked him to the paved concrete floor, "and make yourself useful! Where's the fucking document?!"

"I am not watching-"

"Crap..." Saintesse muttered; an alarm had begun to blare. "Tira... did you trip the alarm...?"

Her only response was the soft-spoken female's meek, embarrassed, "Sorry..."


So yeah, that's all really.

Lovee bunches!

~The_Paper_Tiger

P.S: Patches, for making this forum, you are a fucking genius! <3


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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSat 01 Oct 2011, 10:32 am

Hi melanie!
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSat 01 Oct 2011, 3:41 pm

Minaaaa.
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSat 01 Oct 2011, 4:24 pm

Sakky-chaaaan.

And hai, Flee~ :3
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 4:05 pm

Speek for yourself.
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 5:06 pm

We are the Resistance.
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 5:45 pm

Omni, you win an internetz for getting the song reference. XD

... Actually, as it turns out, I am all out of internetz, so here's a Make Your Own Pickle kit instead. o3o *gives a cucumber, a jar, and a bottle of vineagar*

Hawk, for also getting it, you get this dead fish. o3o *gives half-eaten salmon*

I ran out of prizes, so I just got that from the dumpster. Hope you don't mind. xO
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 5:59 pm

nom nom nom
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 6:00 pm

Here Hawk you can have my pickle.
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 6:01 pm

nom nom nom
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 6:01 pm

*backs away slowly, then stops because her ADD kicked in*
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 6:02 pm

noooo
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 7:43 pm

The_Paper_Tiger wrote:
*backs away slowly, then stops because her ADD kicked in*
BTW, you have been removed from the network due to inactivity.
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 8:03 pm

Shoop da whoop, Mina.
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 8:24 pm

I had no Idea people had Pickled Salmon in their Dumpsters... The Grizzlie's there must be crazy smart.
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeSun 02 Oct 2011, 8:31 pm

Somebody would throw that out? What?
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeMon 03 Oct 2011, 1:13 am

@Flee: I've been on a different server. There's more people there. xP

(We're talking about Minecraft btw, guys)

@Shade: And all your base are belong to us. Nice to see ya, Shade. ;P

@Amon: Isn't Amon-ra the Egyptian sun god that made babies by jackin' off in the middle of literal nowhere (you can thank my text book for my Western Art class for teaching me that)? XD

But more to the point, the grizzly bears you speak of are from another universe; a stereotypical one where animals are sentient and humans... are not. *cackles*
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeMon 03 Oct 2011, 6:28 am

I know, I am a fucking genius. <3

You're a fucking genius for joining, too.
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeMon 03 Oct 2011, 11:00 am

@Patches: ~<3
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeMon 03 Oct 2011, 11:27 am

So how has your schoolish collage stuff going? Have you made all the other students bow down to your presence yet?
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeMon 03 Oct 2011, 1:24 pm

Mah schoolish stuff is going quite well, though I don't recall mentioning working on a collage. ;P

The process of having people bow down to me is progressing quite smoothly.

On another note, I'm getting Suicide Squad #1 later on today! 8D

The Fall 2011 reboot version~

Harley Quinn looks so badass. >;3

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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeMon 03 Oct 2011, 2:03 pm

Oops, oh my. I meant college.

Nice to hear! Make them give you a foot massage and paint your nails or something, hehe.

What on Earth is Suicide Squad? A... no, no guessing. I'm a bad guesser.

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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeMon 03 Oct 2011, 5:55 pm

Well, if you're familiar with the DC multiverse at all, then you could probably figure out that Harley is from the Batman universe in specific. Suicide Squad is basically about a group of DC comics on death row who, if they complete these ridiculously difficult (one might say suicidal) tasks for the US government, will basically be let off the hook (or at the least won't get the lever pulled on them so to speak). Harley Quinn is one of these inmates.

Btw, I'm not very familiar with DC. XD
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeMon 03 Oct 2011, 5:57 pm

Oh my. Sounds... like that they will be having a lot of fun, lol.

The weather has been too crappy and cold for me to go rollerblading. D:

Fuck you Pennsylvania.
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PostSubject: Re: Guess who~ :3   Guess who~ :3 I_icon_minitimeMon 03 Oct 2011, 7:13 pm

Oops. I meant criminals from the DC multiverse who are on death row. XD

But yeah. Sounds really cool, right? :3

Aww. D=

PENNSYLVANIA! Y U SO COLD?!


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