Balu
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 |  Subject: The Unforeseen: OOC (Prologue)  Mon 10 Oct 2011, 12:17 am | |
| The Unforeseen: Prologue. A text adventure. FIRST ONE! :>Ok this is for the text adventure I made, It would please me if you take a look, and make some suggestions. All things discovered will be listed below: The Shadowmen - Black ops soldier/assassins, hired by crime lords, ambitious governments, and influential people who want things done their way or not at all. In this they are mysterious. They drive older, black vehicles. Steve is suspicious, and believes the current case involves them. Please comment, take a look, and react to things IC. THIS IS PROLOGUE. Testing mind you, I am seeing if the Idea gathers interest.
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Balu
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| | Subject: Re: The Unforeseen: OOC (Prologue) Mon 10 Oct 2011, 5:32 pm | |
| And I would be someone to make a Text Adventure no one looks at. | |
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Snowy
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| | Subject: Re: The Unforeseen: OOC (Prologue) Tue 29 May 2012, 9:09 am | |
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Balu
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| | Subject: Re: The Unforeseen: OOC (Prologue) Tue 29 May 2012, 2:03 pm | |
| ... I forgot about this some time ago...
Anyway... Updated? | |
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Snowy
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| | Subject: Re: The Unforeseen: OOC (Prologue) Tue 29 May 2012, 2:08 pm | |
| I figured I could give you something to do. :P
The title of it gives some interesting insight concerning what this may be about. | |
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Balu
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| | Subject: Re: The Unforeseen: OOC (Prologue) Tue 29 May 2012, 5:23 pm | |
| Well, it really involves a lot of things. More will be explained in the TA eventually, after I establish the reason that The main character and the mysterious shooter are alternating the Current POV. | |
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